Can't it be

Saraseon na andoegessni neoui sarangeul batneun il
Jugeodo neon andoegessni nareul heorakhaneun il

Nae gaseumi haneun mal sesang ullil deushande
Dan hansaram wae neon deutji moshaneun geoni
Jamsi meomulda ganeun ni gaseum ttaemune
Chama neol beoril sudo eopsneunde

Geuriwo nan niga neomu geuriwo
Neol ilheun salmi summakhil deut oerowo
Saranghajanha piharyeogo hajima
Meolligado neon nae ane issjanha

Doragago sipjiman doedolligo sipjiman
Ijen cheoeumeuro ganeun gireul nan molla
Haengbokhago sipeodo neo eopsneun haengbogeun
Naegen deo amu soyongeopsneunde

Geuriwo nan niga neomu geuriwo
Neol ilheun salmi summakhil deut oerowo
Saranghajanha piharyeogo hajima
Meolligado neon nae ane issneunde

Sesangeun naege michyeossda malhaedo
Neoreul jikyeonael su issneun najanha
Saranghae neol jugeulmankeum saranghae
Nae nameun salmeul da geolmankeum neol wonhae
Saraganeunge saranghaneun ilboda
Himgyeowodo nan ni gyeote isseulkke